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by Lawrence Maximilian in Other about September 30, 2018 - report

tired

Lo-Fi Inspired Track I made recently. Would love to hear some feedback! 

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    by Matthew Bowden 1 about October 15, 2018

    I enjoyed that! Thanks for the upload!

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    by Alex Phountzi 1 about October 6, 2018

    I love the guitar on this, is this your playing Lawrence. The vocal sample adds a surreal twist...I think the intro part is strongest. The musical idea seems to meander a bit as the arrangement develops. There is a chord movement at the end of the track which is really strong and I think you could make that more of a feature and build a whole section around it. How are you feeling about it?

    And as has already been pointed out, the bass panned to the left is distracting, I would suggest you put that in the middle of your mix

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    • Lawrence Maximilian
      by Lawrence Maximilian
      October 10, 2018

      Thanks for the feedback! I'm not sure how that happened with the bass, I thought I had it in the centre..

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    by Max Achar about October 3, 2018

    Sorry about that, it was the balance on my device.

    Your track is great!

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    by Max Achar about October 3, 2018

    Great chill vibe.

    The bass on one side takes my focus away from the other instruments though. 

    Hope this helps

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