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by Paul Barlow in Pop about January 20, 2016 - report

tears at the heart of things

I wrote this on my ableton 1 course and I love the old school strings-vocals in my bedroom-which i can't do at the moment-neighbours-I like the lyric and sentiment

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    by Alex Phountzi 1 about January 20, 2016

    Thanks Paul. The main issue here is the vocal level which is way too loud. There are also elements of the performance I would suggest that you lose/re-record or edit. For example around 4.32 there are parts of the vocal that overlap and sound messy and there was at least one line in the song where you didn't get all the words out. The backing track works well, but at the moment is being swamped by the vocal level. The first thing I would suggest working on is the vocals

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