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by Tevich Pornaruntham in Dubstep about May 23, 2019 - report

With You (Ft.Karra)

I was spent a lot of time to make dubstep sound by myself, I want you to comment this song. If you like this, you can follow me on the Soundcloud. I hope you enjoy it :) Thanks

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    by Stavros Potamitis about May 28, 2019

    I really enjoyed this. It is evident that you have a fairly good understanding of sound design and production techniques. There is however room for improvement on the drums and overall mix. Great effort!

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    • Tevich Pornaruntham
      by Tevich Pornaruntham
      June 8, 2019

      Hey Stavros! Thank you so much for feedback !
      I sure next song will be much better!

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    by Zachary Russell about May 23, 2019

    Well you deserve more followers 1st off, 2nd I would love to collab on something altho I'm not at your level of sound design/mastering/mixing so that's up to you lol.

    for feedback, whoever you worked with for vocals is great, and you did a great job processing them. You got chords/uplifting pluck in your intro which is dope. Besides your continuous pluck which i guess could be centered as a melody, maybe another melody synth in the background to accompany her voice (very subjective). Right before your breakdown nice Virtual Riot sounding growl. I don't think your kick or snare is bad, could be better in the drop--more sidechain idk, maybe a little more low end is missing? but your 1st trap song has a better kick imo. Use her voice in the drops!! Not always/distort them, you got good vocals you should use them (not just at the end). The one you have in your first drop could be a little louder(come on boys), but if your focusing on percussion keep it. After drop is too quiet, keep a little pace. I guess you have a melody of bells in the 2nd intro so nice. Okay and now most of the stuff of the stuff I commented on the 1st drop is in the 2nd lol hell yah. &  at 4:10 not huge fan of the dub synth i think it's too continuous/should be used with your main a little but 2nd drops better than 1st/maybe should be longer too

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    • Tevich Pornaruntham
      by Tevich Pornaruntham
      May 23, 2019

      Thanks for feedback and try to listen my song. I really love your comment :)
      Next song , I will improve better than this . I started music production in Pointblank Music school for 7 month, Sometime I missing something about mixing. Thanks for comment me back. :)))

    • Tevich Pornaruntham
      by Tevich Pornaruntham
      May 23, 2019

      I will add friend to you , when we have time let's collaborate together :)))

    • Zachary Russell
      by Zachary Russell
      May 24, 2019

      :)

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