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by David Sephton in Electronic Rock about March 27, 2019 - report

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An original song of mine

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    by pblank about March 28, 2019

    Nice track, if anythning I would try & give the piano chords a bit of variation, it's too repetive throughout. And also the guitar/ lead sound sounds a bit too flat. Otherwise good track

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    • David Sephton
      by David Sephton
      March 28, 2019

      cheers - will have a rethink on the piano and look into the guitar tuning ;)

    • David Sephton
      by David Sephton
      March 30, 2019

      Have done a bit of a revamp - see what you think :)

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    by Stavros Potamitis about March 28, 2019

    I really like this David. As much as I like the musical ideas in this and the overall composition however, production has room for improvement. Your drums could be a lot better, so could the bass liine in terms of both sound design and sonic/musical movement throughout the track. In addition, the piano sounds like a loop throughout and more variation on the timbre would be very beneficial to make the piece more engaging. Overall, this piece has a lot of potential so well done.

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    • David Sephton
      by David Sephton
      March 28, 2019

      Thanks for feedback Stavros - yeah piano loop probably reflects the level of my keyboard skills ;) - agree production needs a bit more work to tighten up the whole thing - but glad you like it !!

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